It's... fine, I guess. I'm not sure if it's the translation I read, but I found the dialogue difficult to follow. There were multiple points where I spent ages trying to figure out who was saying what before eventually giving up and moving on. The story itself is a bit choppy, too, with some parts feeling rushed or skipped over. The overall concept itself was bizarre, it felt a little bit like something I might’ve come up with as a teenage daydream, but I think with better execution it could’ve been okay. As it is, the only reason I finished was that it was so short.