Magatsu Wanashi no Yuushagari review

Lucisz12
Apr 12, 2021
This review will primarily be focussed on why the ecchi scenes ruin it and will also have a spoiler for a later scene (and if rape makes you uncomfortable skip this review and manga)

The ecchi in this manga is horrendous, it infests and degrades the rest of the experience. The existance of the rampant amount of ecchi brings wih it tone problems, doubt about whether the author is just getting themselves off or not, inconsisent character writing and a host of other problems. For an example I am going to use the orc blackmail-drug-rape-mindbreak scene that is in one of the latest chapters. The scene is about the female mc (which I actually like, she seems like she has a lot of potential and I enjoy the plot direction shes going with "Im a princess who barely went to the outside world" to "im competent") getting cornered by a guy who she thought was her ally and being blackmailed into becoming his woman (couldnt think of any better wording, wife felt wrong and concubine also felt wrong for it) and then raped by him. Without going into detail basically she gets raped and then she gets drugged because orc semen is apperantly an aphrodesiac in this world. Problem no.1 this scene doesnt need to exist if you want a plotline like this all you need is for the orc to say is "become my woman and then we will reclaim the demon territory , without me you wont stand a chance" boom, I just fixed a stupid plot-point and cut down the needed artwork of 2 chapters for more important stuff. This also leads to another problem I have with this manga that being tonal whiplash. Because after this the hero comes in and chops off the guys dick, Because foccussed a lot of his magic energy into his dick (no I am not joking) he becomes weakend and then the female mc SAYS THAY HE'S NOT DEAD BUT HE'S WEAK. To start a tiny tangent why would you not restrain him or double tap his skull. But anyway this is played for laughs because his dick was just chopped off and he named it, despite the fact that second earlier the tone was that of seriousness (for obvious reasons). Anyway then he re-gains his power and a stupid scene plays out where I couldnt tell if it was supposed to be funny or not, where the guy breaks through metal traps and weapons using his dick as a blunt object (no I am not joking).

This isnt even the only rape scene too. Theres a femdom-yandere-neotari scene before this and if you include the "re-education panels then theres 3 in total.

Overall dont read this.
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Magatsu Wanashi no Yuushagari
Magatsu Wanashi no Yuushagari
Автор Wadapen.
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