This was nice story with a very satisfying ending.

I've seen some complain that they wanted more than a kiss. But i feel that if the story did that it would take away more from the fact that one of them has so much baggage, It wouldn't really make sense either. I was sure that the ending would be a let down and i was pleasantly surprised that the story ended and i felt that it ended in a good spot.

The rest of t he story is good. It does have some issues such as.

. Some of the stuff that happened's seems kind of forced or too unlikely to be believable. Such as the stuff that happened's with one of the MC's sister seems way too forced i guess would be the word.

. There is times when you want the characters to say certain things and it fees obvious. But the story doesn't want to do that. Such as when the Male MC here's people talking about the other MC. You kind of want him to get defensive.

. The story also has a not needed character in the form of a bitch. She all through out is just kind of psycho and it isn't really needed. It doesn't do anything for the story.

Over all this was a very good story with some minor problems.