The story could've had few more chapters to make it more appealing. Everything was thrown in at once in the first chapter and all kinda scattered around the place. It takes you by surprise. Only afterwards did it start to develop. The theme/topic for a story was excellent, but it could've been developed much better. The main character overcame her fear of everything way too easily. And therefore left so many questions unanswered, that could've been done nicely in the later chapters or in the middle of everything.